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I have a new student who is older than me. However, she is very interested in the English language. So I need to learn and communicate in English with her very often. I'll continue to update this blog.
(note)
1. "I have a new student. She is older than me." These 2 sentences can be combined and simplified into one by adding "who".
2. I presume that you will communicate with your student in English.
3. Your last sentence has no meaning, so I have tried to correct it according to your intention as much as possible. I hope that it is correct. :)
(my entry)
I have a new student. She is older than me. However, she is interested in English very much. So I need learn and use more English. I'll keep continue this blog again.
(note)
1. "I have a new student. She is older than me." These 2 sentences can be combined and simplified into one by adding "who".
2. I presume that you will communicate with your student in English.
3. Your last sentence has no meaning, so I have tried to correct it according to your intention as much as possible. I hope that it is correct. :)
(my entry)
I have a new student. She is older than me. However, she is interested in English very much. So I need learn and use more English. I'll keep continue this blog again.
posted by Polyanthus at 11:01 AM
1 Comments:
And just one more correction. In this comment you don't need "HOWEVER", because there is no "But"! Being older than you has nothing to do with her wanting to study English, so no need for the "however".
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